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Offline Mark T

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« on: September 25, 2013, 04:59:46 PM »

Your insanity
blends so well
with reality,
I think it must be me.
« Last Edit: September 25, 2013, 05:57:51 PM by Mark T »

Offline bri h

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« Reply #1 on: September 25, 2013, 05:37:02 PM »
Your insanity
blends so well
with reality,
I think it must just be me.


Hiya Mark. I like this, but am not fond of 'must-just.' Am intrigued to know 'must be me'-what? What must you be? the one who finds you weird? The one who finds you unrealistic? What? Tell me, I command it! heh heh. B
Fare thee well Skip. We're all 'Keening' now. xbx

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« Reply #2 on: September 25, 2013, 05:40:01 PM »
Fiddle R us

slight change and it's an American Sentence

Your insanity
blends so well
with reality,
it must be me.

Forgive

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« Reply #3 on: September 25, 2013, 05:57:23 PM »

Heidi, that was my original line. Truly. I added the just for an eye sonic. Reverting to the simplicity, thanks.

Bri, howzit, my bru. I refuse to answer your question on the grounds of insanity - all of you that is, not mine.
  
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« Reply #4 on: September 25, 2013, 05:59:59 PM »
Deein gud n hav'n a bud. heh heh. B
Fare thee well Skip. We're all 'Keening' now. xbx

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« Reply #5 on: September 25, 2013, 06:02:09 PM »

I hope that's proper bud and not that Yankee piss they call beer.

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« Reply #6 on: September 26, 2013, 05:11:00 AM »
Hi
The poem is fun and I declare eye sonic as the worst expression I have had the misfortune over ever encountering.
Duck

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« Reply #7 on: September 26, 2013, 05:45:24 AM »
Nice one, Mark
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« Reply #8 on: September 26, 2013, 07:13:30 AM »

 Hi Dave, very well put about eye sonic, ha ha. Jewel, thanks for reading.

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« Reply #9 on: September 26, 2013, 12:10:59 PM »
Neat work. ;) A bit close to one of the characters I'm writing about, maybe this is a warning. :o

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« Reply #10 on: September 26, 2013, 01:04:43 PM »

Howzit Sio, thanks for comment. Hey, did you ever finish reading my manuscript? PM me.

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« Reply #11 on: September 26, 2013, 01:16:43 PM »
Got caught up in summer school and what developed from that . . . Bloody Scotland, manuscript etc.

It's still in my docs folder. ;)

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« Reply #12 on: September 26, 2013, 03:07:32 PM »
Can relate  :D Nice one, Mark.  Isonic

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« Reply #13 on: September 26, 2013, 03:15:28 PM »
I actually thought it was a typo and shoulda read 'eye-tonic,' that's why I didn't say owt. We can't both be insane, that's preposterossus. heh heh B
Fare thee well Skip. We're all 'Keening' now. xbx