This didn't seem to go in the critique forums because I'm not posting any work for critique. If this is the wrong forum, I apologize.
I'm looking for a couple of people who don't mind
urban fantasy who might be interested in an email critique exchange of the "red line" variety. I.e., draw a literal or metaphorical red line under the place where you stopped reading, and explain why. People with some writing experience or publication history are preferred but not required!
A "red line" approach is the best kind of critique, IMO, because either you enjoy the read, or it's a very short read.

If anyone is game -- anyone who is not bothered on principle by an urban fantasy involving fairies -- let me know!
Also feel free to post here (assuming this is an appropriate post to begin with) if you want to look for this kind of exchange for your own work but don't want to read mine!