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Offline 4st7lb

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Ana's Model For Life
« on: July 28, 2013, 07:15:15 PM »
Drink,
only coffee, (Splenda)
diet coke,  water
no carbs in the AM
 
 
Shower, weigh,
strive to succeed
spend allowance
on magazines

 
Pictures, snaps,
collage of perfect hips
on the wall
tips and tricks
 
 
Goals, commitment,
routine
two beef broth cubes
twice a day
 
 
Twelve chews
negative calorie food
take no pleasure
walk, walk, walk!
burn away
 
 
Eat, always
near a trashcan,
imagine yourself
crawling at the bottom.
self harm - is discipline
- is beauty - is sanctity.

Worship paragon
 of nothingness
 
Vomit is prayer
and God
is porcelain
 

Offline bri h

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Re: Ana's Model For Life
« Reply #1 on: July 28, 2013, 07:28:50 PM »
Wow! Love the last S. Ses it so clearly and with all the power needed. Well done. B
Fare thee well Skip. We're all 'Keening' now. xbx

Offline 4st7lb

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Re: Ana's Model For Life
« Reply #2 on: July 28, 2013, 07:37:35 PM »
Haha, thank you. Someone corrected the last stanza for me so I can't really take credit. Also told me to remove 26-28

So here is the revised version:

Drink
only coffee, (Splenda)
diet coke,  water
no carbs in the AM
 
 
Shower, weigh,
strive to succeed
spend allowance
on magazines
 
 
Pictures, snaps,
perfect hips
on the walls
tips and tricks

 
Goals, commitment,
routine
two beef cubes
twice a day
Twelve chews,


negative calorie food
take no pleasure
walk, walk, walk!
burn it away
 
 
Eat, always
near a trashcan
imagine yourself
crawling at the bottom
 
 
Vomit is prayer
and God
is porcelain

JewelAS53

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Re: Ana's Model For Life
« Reply #3 on: August 05, 2013, 02:15:40 AM »
Lovely
and awful
as it should be.

well done.