Debbie. These are the rules of this site. I am sorry your husband is in this unfortunate situation and if there was a way we could help we would. However, thems the rules for everyone.

You would be affronted if someone put up David's poems as there own for gain. I know this isn't the case here, but in reality it has happened.
I have removed the poem and locked the topic. Nothing can be gained from carrying it on.
Just an after thought. Maybe you could try and get a writing buddy in the twinning section who, with clear idea of the problem, might be able to help critique him by pm. I can't guarantee any volunteers but it may be worth a try.