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Offline michaelsummers

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3 + 3
« on: March 18, 2012, 12:42:32 PM »
Hi everyone,
I'm a new author and I'm looking for people to review my work. I currently have a new short story out called 3 + 3 and I'd be really grateful if some of you could review it. The blurb is as follows:

3 + 3 is an edgy tale of chance based around Theo, who we find with a gun to his head and a finger on the trigger. As the story progresses, Theo’s extraordinary history unfolds; a history that has been subtly leading up to this life or death moment without him knowing. Luck has a peculiar fate in store for this unlikely hero, and the number six has something to do with it. So just roll the dice...

You can find it on Smashwords.


Thanks!
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Re: 3 + 3
« Reply #1 on: March 21, 2012, 08:18:03 AM »
You need to post it here if you want feedback rather than just give us the links and promotional bumff.

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Re: 3 + 3
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2012, 08:54:41 AM »
I'll give it a miss until it's posted here thanks all the same.
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Offline Margarett

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Re: 3 + 3
« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2012, 09:33:41 AM »
It did not download anyway. I gave it a try.
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Re: 3 + 3
« Reply #4 on: March 22, 2012, 07:34:49 AM »
Waste of time.  I tried.  All I found was a load of promotional stuff - about you. 
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Re: 3 + 3
« Reply #5 on: March 24, 2012, 09:36:32 AM »
I downloaded the pdf and started reading. Never got past the first page.
For me, it sort of went downhill after, snakes and ladders.  :-\

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