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Offline Dibbledabble

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Re: Infinity
« Reply #30 on: February 06, 2012, 05:49:08 PM »
Isn't poetry school fun!

Rev 4

Last before bedtime, up at 6am

Infinite Hope (rev 4)

Turn all the lights out, find the darkest place
Don't the stars look fine?   
Billion miles away they glimmer bright.

We stretched out on our recliners
 Gazing up at the heavens
Young eyes shone lips parted in awe
How amazed and overwhelmed are we
Part of all this wonderment and beautifully small

Space expands as do young minds
A fatherly smile
Infinity up there, infinity within
Never-ending possibilities




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Re: Infinity
« Reply #31 on: February 06, 2012, 05:51:01 PM »
Sorry if I upset you -- I'm a daddy's girl and loved those moments shared when he would tell me things I didn't know. Fond memories. :)

However, I am also a grown woman . . . and -- sometimes those fatherly types are more like sugar daddies and aren't interested in your welfare. There are sneaky old buggers out there who would take advantage of a young girl when star gazing [not talking pervy kid stuff, but even 18/19 is quite young] :)

When your daughter is older you will warn her about these kind of gentlemen -- who live in infinite hope.

Rather than 'Infinite Hope' perhaps just call it 'For My Daughter' . . . no confusion then. ;)
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Re: Infinity
« Reply #32 on: February 06, 2012, 06:01:14 PM »
Am I that nieve, or you so cynical? I shake my head in dispair

Point taken though!


perhaps Infinate Adoration? IDK, can't sit up till midnight. I will sleep on it!


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Re: Infinity
« Reply #33 on: February 06, 2012, 06:04:12 PM »
50/50 I suspect. ;D
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