Author Topic: [Poem] The Cheese Factory  (Read 937 times)

Offline ashleylegier

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[Poem] The Cheese Factory
« on: January 12, 2012, 11:15:43 PM »
                                                                          The Cheese Factory
                                                                 In big pots you sit, until you mold
                                                         Oh what a golden day, the mixers starts to say.
                                                                    Now wrap and write feta on it.
                                                         Then down de rocky lane, into the de shops you go.
                                                        Then up de rocky lane, the change for which you sold
                                                                          Whats left of the story,
                                           may not be told, except Iíll tell you de cheese indeed did get sold.

Offline Skip Slocum

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Re: [Poem] The Cheese Factory
« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2012, 11:59:42 PM »
You may want to go over to the welcome board, start a new thread and introduce yourself.

http://www.mywriterscircle.com/index.php/board,1.0.html

Offline SparkyDashforth

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Re: [Poem] The Cheese Factory
« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2012, 10:28:13 AM »
 ;) Enjoyed

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Re: [Poem] The Cheese Factory
« Reply #3 on: January 15, 2012, 06:16:44 PM »
Very well written. I enjoyed the humor to a subject I haven't given much thought to.

Offline ashleylegier

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Re: [Poem] The Cheese Factory
« Reply #4 on: January 23, 2012, 08:00:19 PM »
Thank you!