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Offline bowmore bill

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« on: September 19, 2011, 05:36:56 PM »
Replies are in response to http://www.mywriterscircle.com/index.php/topic,35808.0.html (hijack).


Hi Syd like you're style, picked out the following.

Dog days
Snow globe
ballpoint alley
millstone

My favourite is without doubt
Snowglobe.
For me , this is the way poetry shoild be written
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« Reply #1 on: October 05, 2011, 08:11:49 PM »
Mixing metaphors for fun and laughs ;D


A Slice Of Laughter

A slice of laughter's all I ask
To help me through each mundane task.

A Scoop of jocularity,
A parcel of hilarity;

Just a shred of jollity
And share a chunk of mirth with me;

A snippet of some merriment
Could mean your time is quite well spent.

So fill your days with joy and glee
With a bit of fun and levity.

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« Reply #2 on: October 18, 2011, 05:29:13 PM »
Hi jimbo ...cheered me up no end, thanks for sharing.

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« Reply #3 on: October 22, 2011, 08:28:21 PM »
Thanks, Bill....

Felt funny logging in under "poetry" and I'm glad you liked it.  Like lot of other folks, I feel my stuff always needs tweaking...on-going 'works in progress.'  The word games on the site, especially the Limericks and the "First shall be last" games challenge one's skill at writing quickly.  Best of all, of course, it keeps one writing every day:-))