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Conjunctions?
« on: November 06, 2011, 05:00:17 PM »
I know you shouldn't really start a sentence with a conjunction like and or but. However, I know they have relaxed this rule a little.  Do you think though when sending into a publisher a picture aimed at 3-5 year old children that you should avoid them?
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Re: Conjunctions?
« Reply #1 on: November 06, 2011, 05:22:41 PM »
Are we talking a caption on a picture?  I'm (easily) confused. 

Conjuction Junction :D :D :D

I'd say while wearing my "publisher's hat" it's good practice to not get too relaxed from the rules.  JMO, all I have is this silly hat, I'm not really a publisher.  ;D
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« Reply #2 on: November 06, 2011, 05:27:23 PM »
Mudge, loved the clip thanks. ;D

If I can give you a rough example.

Wouldn't it be funny if cats pooed?
And dogs woofed. Or should you change it to If?


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« Reply #3 on: November 06, 2011, 05:34:49 PM »
I'm still not getting the context.  I'm dense today.   ;)

Are you saying the cats pooed as a result of the dogs barking?   :-\

Wouldn't it be funny if cats pooed if (when) dogs woofed?   ??? ???

Sorry I'm not much help so far....  :P
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« Reply #4 on: November 06, 2011, 05:39:43 PM »
I think alfiemama is only worried about the sentence beginnings EG

Wouldn't it be funny if cats woofed?
And dogs chirped.

I think you need to keep it grammatically correct so

Wouldn't it be funny if cats woofed . . . [illustration following the elipsis]
                                                     
                                                    and dogs chirped? [finish with the question mark. All you have done then is split the sentence]

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Re: Conjunctions?
« Reply #5 on: November 06, 2011, 05:42:04 PM »
It's ok Mudge, I'm the same. ::)
The way its written is for example, wouldnt it be funny if cats wore glasses? And dogs dressed in uniform.  So your saying if the world was a strange place.
I can't really explain it and somebody said not to broadcast  it on the internet ::)
I will go with If.  I think just to be safe.

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« Reply #6 on: November 06, 2011, 05:42:36 PM »
I can't hear read or hear the word conjunction without the song starting up in my head.  Thanks for the link, Mudge  :D
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« Reply #7 on: November 06, 2011, 05:44:07 PM »
 ;D ;D ;D @ Laura

all the best alfie-   :D
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Re: Conjunctions?
« Reply #8 on: November 06, 2011, 05:47:02 PM »
Thanks Mudge.  The song will stay with me always (which is a good thing ;D)

Yes Sio that's what I mean.  I'm emailing over a submission, which I believe you still use double spacing, initially if you remember my verse, I had sentences beginning with And so I have changed them to If.

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« Reply #9 on: November 07, 2011, 07:31:01 PM »
If you liked Conjunction Juntion

You should try Lolly, Lolly, Lolly Get Your Adverbs Here.
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« Reply #10 on: November 08, 2011, 06:41:10 AM »
Catchy tune.   :)
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Re: Conjunctions?
« Reply #11 on: November 08, 2011, 07:34:21 AM »
I quite like starting sentences with conjunctions myself. And in a book of this nature I really don't think it would be a problem  ;)
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Re: Conjunctions?
« Reply #12 on: November 08, 2011, 07:52:34 AM »
Thanks Nick, that's good to know.
Spell chic, I have just played this and my little daughter who is only one, loved it, talk about starting her off young  ;D
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