Author Topic: Journey to Heaven  (Read 1070 times)

Offline Eloquent.Writer

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Journey to Heaven
« on: August 08, 2006, 11:30:14 PM »
On wings of fire set free my soul
The burning passion I canít control
On the backs of birds of ice I fly
To the heavens above the starry sky
While I listen to the thunder roll

I hit the space between our lives
Where physical existence ceases to survive
In a time where love is great and strong
Where there is no one who does not belong
When the hopeful soul revives

I see a light so familiar and bright
A symbol of our everlasting flight
During our time on earth so free
A time when we would all agree
On the object of our delight

I know that this is just a start
To the day when we will all depart
To join a force so brilliant and keen
A strength that is never unseen
In the people oh so pure of heart
I have a passion to create a subject of the mind's desire; an object of affection for the innermost workings of the educated imagination.

wizard7wolf

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Re: Journey to Heaven
« Reply #1 on: August 09, 2006, 07:09:34 AM »
Can't say anything bad bout it....lifted my soul

bleek

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Re: Journey to Heaven
« Reply #2 on: August 09, 2006, 11:18:56 AM »
I read it and it is great if you like this kind of poetry but its not my can of sundrop, I now its suppose to be tea, but I hate tea ok....good start
sharon