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Offline Janice Sanford

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My Treasure- a love poem
« on: May 09, 2011, 08:32:02 PM »
My Treasure
by Janice M. Sanford

All the treasure on earth
and in Heaven above
compare not to the love
I have in my heart.

A love that belongs only
to you
A love touched by the
morning dew.....
A love touched by the night
with dreams of you.

A love that if I never love
Begin with you and with you

For you are my everything
here on earth
Our love reaches beyond time
and space
Nothing can keep us a part
For our love is a treasure
created and shared from the

A love blessed by the angels
A love found in dreams
A love touched by the morning dew
Is the kind of love I share with you.

I love you beyond the moment
I am in with a love that had a beginning
but knows no end.


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Re: My Treasure- a love poem
« Reply #1 on: May 10, 2011, 09:16:14 AM »
This heartfelt declaration of love, changes from a personal  to a conjoined expression in stanzas four and five. For consistency, it should remain personal, donít you think?