Author Topic: Zinfindel  (Read 611 times)

Offline Cyndith

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« on: March 30, 2011, 01:04:01 PM »
just playing with some thoughts this morning.  crits on form and punctuation are always welcome. 

pastel robed,
with a maidenly blush,
her youthful innocence
breathes intoxication

to savor a sweet sip
from her delicate kiss
inebriates the soul,
freeing the heart

the temptress does not tempt,
for her sweetness is her seduction

"Why do you do it in the first place? I mean you paint a picture, but you can't explain what it means because the audience is supposed to get it.  But then a judge comes along and says, 'I see this painting, but what you intended for me to see is not what I see; therefore, it isn't'"