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Offline Cyndith

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Zinfindel
« on: March 30, 2011, 01:04:01 PM »
just playing with some thoughts this morning.  crits on form and punctuation are always welcome. 

pastel robed,
with a maidenly blush,
her youthful innocence
breathes intoxication

to savor a sweet sip
from her delicate kiss
inebriates the soul,
freeing the heart

the temptress does not tempt,
for her sweetness is her seduction
--Cyndie

"Why do you do it in the first place? I mean you paint a picture, but you can't explain what it means because the audience is supposed to get it.  But then a judge comes along and says, 'I see this painting, but what you intended for me to see is not what I see; therefore, it isn't'"