Author Topic: Can you guess who is here?  (Read 5349 times)

Offline Mark with a k

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Re: Can you guess who is here?
« Reply #15 on: February 07, 2006, 12:56:58 PM »
Hi,

Looks like an outline to me! GO for it. You might start with the perspective of the scared 11 year old girl. You might title it "selling my eyes". Hope this helps. Looking forward to reading a passage.  :) mary

I’m in agreement with Mary on this point, Gamin. “Selling My Eyes” is an absolutely arresting title that has a back broad enough to carry your work and see it safely through from conception to publication and beyond. Those words plainly resonate with people. Symphony picked up on it too in her observations on your poem.

“Selling My Eyes…”

If I were to see it on a book’s spine, I’d take it off the shelf and want to know more. Mary’s perhaps found your title, your strap line is probably right there in the other titles you were considering.

 Mark