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Offline bttrfly972

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Last Chance
« on: January 25, 2006, 12:10:33 PM »
I didn't know that we could post poetry here.  I just thought this was a short story type of circle......


Last Chance



Shooting stars, fireworks in the sky
A new love twinkles in my eye
Anticipation of a romance that is true
Sweaty palms, tender kisses, romantic I love you’s
Shining armor, embraces my mind, body and soul
Fire burning, warm blankets keep me from the cold
Fearless, strong, this love was supposed to last
Suddenly empty, starving for the happiness of our past
Shattered dreams, broken glass stain
Bruised heart, tears constantly falling like rain
Red eyes, insomnia, in a petrified state
My last chance for love vanishing without a trace


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Re: Last Chance
« Reply #1 on: January 25, 2006, 05:29:23 PM »
Lovely, Victoria. Very sincere. You captured the sentiments very well. Do you write lots of poetry?

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Re: Last Chance
« Reply #2 on: January 26, 2006, 09:45:29 AM »
Hi symphony...thanks for the feedback. I like writing short stories, but i write poetry sometimes, these are the things that I write in my diary...thanks again!!!!

Victoria
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