Hi Royal,
I'd be happy to give you some feedback about your script. I have some experience with editing and proofreading them. I did an editing, adaptation and commissioned content course. I am a female and would possibly be able to help you with your writing if you haven't already found someone.
A bit about myself; I have written poetry and short stories which are all published and I have a few literary awards, so I do have some ability. I am new to scriptwriting, relatively speaking and although I need help with screen directions, my forte is characterization and plot detail.
So I will let this percolate on the back burner and if you want to contact me, say 'yo, Petrice.'