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Re: Her first bouquet of roses
« Reply #15 on: January 01, 2011, 05:39:34 AM »
Thanks Skip. Another consideration. This writing stuff is hard, isn't it?  :D
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Re: Her first bouquet of roses
« Reply #16 on: January 01, 2011, 08:47:06 AM »
Yupper, but fun.

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Re: Her first bouquet of roses
« Reply #17 on: January 05, 2011, 08:07:17 PM »
Im no writer but I enjoyed this. With a bit of editing as suggested, it will be great.

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Re: Her first bouquet of roses
« Reply #18 on: January 06, 2011, 05:34:20 AM »
Thanks.  :D
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Re: Her first bouquet of roses
« Reply #19 on: January 11, 2011, 04:42:46 PM »
Loved the intro, very descriptive yet simple. I also agree that in some places you repeated things. Loved the ended  :)

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Re: Her first bouquet of roses
« Reply #20 on: January 11, 2011, 09:31:43 PM »
Thanks for reading.
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