Author Topic: Shadow Walking  (Read 1426 times)

Offline Raven GrayCloud

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Shadow Walking
« on: July 11, 2006, 05:58:36 PM »
Shadow walking
Not stalking
Watching, Seeing
Hearing, Feeling
No not Feeling
Human Emotion
Too much commotion
Safe in Shadows
No Love No Hate
No Yearning
Burning
Desires
Like Man
No colors either
But comfort
In shades
Without those Icy Blades
Of Human Emotions
Such silly notions
Donít invade
The Land Between
This World of Gray
Not Loneliness
But Onlyness
Balance
Not Blame
On this Shadowed Plane

wizard7wolf

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Re: Shadow Walking
« Reply #1 on: July 12, 2006, 06:11:40 AM »
Hey another good one.
I like the short abruptness of it
The rhyming is a little messed up though
It has finality, I like