Author Topic: My pitch if i decide to :(  (Read 1600 times)

Offline Chriscrider

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My pitch if i decide to :(
« on: September 14, 2010, 07:58:38 PM »
 Rain, a man who fought to keep his country free is now fighting his own country in a struggle to keep them from killing everyone in the world. With a group of twelve soldiers with special powers given to them from angels fight against people with powers from hell who seek nothing but complete destruction of the world. When Rains life is put on the line in the middle of a huge battle of life and death. He decides to let his angel take over his body to fend off the demons who wish to destroy that  which he holds dear. A battle of super natural abilities breaks out to defend the entire world.

Offline DavidMcK

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Re: My pitch if i decide to :(
« Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 04:03:40 PM »
Hi Chriscrider,

I think this needs quite a bit of work. Perhaps if you take time to comment on other peoples work you might get a better response from your fellow writers.