Author Topic: Witness  (Read 1852 times)

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Witness
« on: July 28, 2010, 05:35:47 AM »
I've been playing around with my poetry a bit yesterday, and thought I'd share a poem with you.

Click on the picture to enlarge.  :)

Offline Kowboy

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Re: Witness
« Reply #1 on: July 28, 2010, 11:21:56 PM »
Bravo! One of the best I've read here.

"Like gardners watering dead plants" - wow.
« Last Edit: July 28, 2010, 11:23:38 PM by Kowboy »

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Re: Witness
« Reply #2 on: July 29, 2010, 02:41:14 AM »
Thank you, Kowboy.  :)

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Re: Witness
« Reply #3 on: July 29, 2010, 12:09:52 PM »
it's a good poem.  put the text up in Review My Poetry and I'll critique it a little more.

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Re: Witness
« Reply #4 on: July 29, 2010, 12:30:40 PM »
Thanks, Eric.

I already had this one reviewed on the poetry boards about a year ago. However, I'm always willing to learn more from you, so I might put it back up one of these days.

Not yet though. One poem at a time.