Author Topic: Poem: It's Never to Late  (Read 1251 times)

Offline Janice Sanford

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Poem: It's Never to Late
« on: July 31, 2010, 06:23:57 PM »
It's never too late, to find strength when one's spirit is strong.

It's never-ever- to late to seek love.

Be strong in the spirit, live on in the day, and I can assure you,
God will send an angel to show you the way.

Be strong in love, if the spirit in you is to live on

Most of all, always to yourself be true.

For none other can feel your pain -or- taste your tears

None other can see the world through your eyes.

None other can live your life but you.

It's never to late to find strength in ones time of strife,

When ones heart possess enough love that it does not mind

Leaving  some love behind for another troubled soul to find.

Love, truly, is the greatest gift of all

Be happy in the day, and no matter where you are,

dare to dream on and follow your star.  
« Last Edit: August 01, 2010, 08:17:25 AM by Janice Sanford »

Offline Matt Walker

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Re: Poem: It's Never to Late
« Reply #1 on: August 01, 2010, 05:04:58 AM »
An uplifting poem, but it should be "too late" not "to late", and there are a few missing commas. May seem like a small point but it does detract from the poem. All the best
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Offline Janice Sanford

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Re: Poem: It's Never to Late
« Reply #2 on: August 01, 2010, 08:01:10 AM »
An uplifting poem, but it should be "too late" not "to late", and there are a few missing commas. May seem like a small point but it does detract from the poem. All the best

Thank you, for commenting. You are correct, that "small points" do detract from my poem. I will try too be more careful. Again, thank you.