Author Topic: Your feelings towards a character, please {789 words}  (Read 2792 times)

Offline A.J.B

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Re: Your feelings towards a character, please {789 words}
« Reply #15 on: June 30, 2010, 07:06:11 AM »
I see what you mean about the names, Socom.

I have changed the name Julan to 'Coln'. Sounds more of a merchantish name I think.
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Re: Your feelings towards a character, please {789 words}
« Reply #16 on: July 01, 2010, 02:14:11 PM »
It is difficult to establish a character in such a short time but I did feel the bitterness in Julan which I think is possibly shared between his brother and his dead father. Jerak is obviously the scholar and more sedentary of the brothers and I get the sense of some impending conflict erupting between the brothers with possible violence ensuing. The use of the same initial for the brothers is not an issue in my humble opinion as one finds many families favour this style of naming siblings. ( I say this as my brother has the same initial as me).
I have enjoyed the read so far and hope to see more of this in the future.