Hi, please comment on the following if you can. I did it very quickly; I'm sorry if it's a bit messy
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I'm suffering a little
yet within me you grow.
And suffering I'll bear
without a whisper of care
For within me, this beating
undeniably glorious feeling
is worth a multitude of pain
on which a life is revealing.
What's a period of discomfort
compared to your first explorations,
you first gasps of breath and your senses awakened?
Vibrant, alive! Roaming so free.
In this tiny space
I see me
Extended and perfected to an ultimate level
One that nobody will reach -
Except for you.
You, Little One, Yet to be seen
Yet to be held in my waiting arms.
And he stands there proud
For he waits as well.
You. A bounty of hope.
The power that drives us.
A pathway is set and time is in motion
We'll do what we can in the time that we have
And we know that whatever - our love is shared.
Peace itself is the joy you bring
Until the day you're announced,
this heart of mine sings.
Pumping and beating
This heart oh so wonderous!
Now it is yours - perceptions have altered.
What was once merely there
without thought and due care
Exists as a lifeline
to my Little One, my prayer.
