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Re: Cheese
« Reply #15 on: March 04, 2010, 08:57:11 AM »
Wow....I'm honored you find this poem child worthy, although...you guys almost make it sound as if, you never realized that I waz capable, of a chilldren's poem...;)

My 11-year old read it, and thought it was cool and funny.  :)

But indeed, John is right, don't get into bad spelling habits. Somehow, getting into bad habits is always easier than breaking them later on.

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Re: Cheese
« Reply #16 on: March 04, 2010, 09:16:53 AM »
let me illustrate something.  right now, as we speak, there's a 16 year old girl, alone on a boat in the ocean.  she's attempting to sail (SOLO) around the world.  it's going to take her 6 months, alone, at sea to accomplish that task.  she sends out a blog every few days and it's fascinating following this firecely intelligant and incredibly mature young person.  and you'll notice that in her blog there's not a wuz or a cuz in it.  she sets a great example.  you can check it out here:

http://abbysunderland.com/
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Re: Cheese
« Reply #17 on: March 04, 2010, 10:33:57 AM »
Thanks for posting that link, John. Quite a girl, eh? Not only can she sail a boat solo round the world, repair sails, engine parts, keep cool when in potential danger – she can write immaculately, with, as you say, not a chat-room affectation in sight.

She’s an inspiration. Let’s hope teenage members will follow her blogs and learn.

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Re: Cheese
« Reply #18 on: March 04, 2010, 10:44:53 AM »
well badd spelyn zeemz ter gett atenshun izn't itt? and vatz vot iz vontet ......izn't itt?? ;D
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Re: Cheese
« Reply #19 on: March 04, 2010, 12:22:05 PM »
Thanks for posting that link, John. Quite a girl, eh? Not only can she sail a boat solo round the world, repair sails, engine parts, keep cool when in potential danger – she can write immaculately, with, as you say, not a chat-room affectation in sight.

She’s an inspiration. Let’s hope teenage members will follow her blogs and learn.

Hugh


six months down the road, when she's done with this incredible voyage (and she WILL make it) life will never present her with any challenge she can't overcome.  16 years old.
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http://www.epicrites.org/

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Re: Cheese
« Reply #20 on: March 04, 2010, 12:47:16 PM »
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well badd spelyn zeemz ter gett atenshun izn't itt? and vatz vot iz vontet ......izn't itt??


perfection is a dead end. chaos the freeway. ;D
And I gave my heart to know wisdom, and to know madness and folly: I perceived that this also is vexation of spirit. -ECCLESIASTES 1:17

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Re: Cheese
« Reply #21 on: March 04, 2010, 04:22:58 PM »


perfection is a dead end. chaos the freeway. ;D


That's meaningless bollocks.


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Re: Cheese
« Reply #22 on: March 04, 2010, 04:25:28 PM »
That's meaningless bollocks.

with regard to the spelling issue, i have to agree.
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http://www.epicrites.org/

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Re: Cheese
« Reply #23 on: March 04, 2010, 05:18:50 PM »


perfection is a dead end. chaos the freeway. ;D


Chaos? Most definately. ;)

And, I get it. I get it. As long as you guys quit with all the incorrect spellings. I can't figure it out. What Vienna had said was complicated.


Hey? Read that? I put "was". No way. Just kidding!!!! ;)

But yeah.....and it's not "wuz" Mr.Yamrus. It's "Waz." No stealing that word! 25 cents a steal.....:)
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Re: Cheese
« Reply #24 on: March 04, 2010, 05:29:43 PM »


But yeah.....and it's not "wuz" Mr.Yamrus. It's "Waz." No stealing that word! 25 cents a steal.....:)

well, truth be told, i was actually employing the eastern highlands version of street talk, but since i'm trying to learn your lingo, i stand corrected...now, where WAZ i?
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http://www.epicrites.org/

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Re: Cheese
« Reply #25 on: March 04, 2010, 05:48:28 PM »
well, truth be told, i was actually employing the eastern highlands version of street talk, but since i'm trying to learn your lingo, i stand corrected...now, where WAZ i?
john ;)


That's 25 cents, Mister!!!! Look at that, you just wasted a quarter! You could've used that quarter to....contribute to...helping...re-lengthen the day by a HALF a milisecond, and you wasted it. On a three letter word. How could you? Now we'll be be stuck with days that are half a milisecond shorter, and all because you wasted a quarter. Tsk tsk, Mr. Yamrus. :D
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Re: Cheese
« Reply #26 on: March 04, 2010, 05:51:41 PM »

Mr. Yamrus. :D

while i applaud and appreciate your sense of respect and formality, there's no need to call me Mr....His High Lord Holiness will suffice.  ;D
 seriously, though, please call me john
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http://www.epicrites.org/

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Re: Cheese
« Reply #27 on: March 04, 2010, 06:12:47 PM »
Erh?
BOOMERANG!!!!!!!!!!!! ;D
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Re: Cheese
« Reply #28 on: March 04, 2010, 06:16:21 PM »
while i applaud and appreciate your sense of respect and formality, there's no need to call me Mr....His High Lord Holiness will suffice.  ;D
 seriously, though, please call me john


Uh....I don't know if I can do that....it seems weird and disrespectful and you're an elder! (That sounds bad too, but it's true! You older than me and stuff....) You're like a sempai....only you're more or less a sensei....so, I can't really....it'd be...rude-ish.... :-[


And you still owe me that quarter!
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Re: Cheese
« Reply #29 on: March 04, 2010, 06:17:57 PM »
Erh?
BOOMERANG!!!!!!!!!!!! ;D

"Catches boomerang" ....Ha. Looks like boomerangs don't come back,   ;D
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