Author Topic: Shattered Self  (Read 1676 times)

Offline actpoet1

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Shattered Self
« on: June 08, 2006, 02:04:02 PM »
I am part of the day.
   I hear the pastor’s preaches screeching up the church’s perch.
I hear the car’s roar.
I hear guitars.

I am part of the night.
I hear the juju man’s words wandering up the trees’ leaves.
   I hear the lion’s roar.
   I hear drums.

“Which part should I lean to?”
I ask, staring through the window at Philly.
Darkness chokes alleys and cardboards boxes.
Light excites penthouses and boxes of diamonds.
I turn to the mirror in my bathroom and see both
day and night. Who I am shatters
like glass. “Is this how nature has it?
Should I deny half of my past?”

Then I turn and view the sky.
It’s unjust: night loses its hold
as if stars slash its hands; a slither of streetlight lacerates it sides.
Time shoves it aside 
for sunlight and snowflakes.
“There’s my answer.”
   
A part of me turns ill

as I slump onto the toilet
and dart my eyes to a photo of a meadow:
shelves of dandelions beheaded by a
surging mudslide. Their stems ruptured. Their boughs spilling
over. Lilies in a pond at the meadow’s edge snapped in two.

Now the other part of me turns ill.

SAY8
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Offline CarrieSheppard

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Re: Shattered Self
« Reply #1 on: June 08, 2006, 06:29:37 PM »
Nice one.  I can see different interpretations - but the pace and depth are ... clinging.

Carrie