Mark,
thank you for your response. I decided to try to rewrite this. If you have time and inclination could you check my poem's title Bread Baking in the Moonlight (or something like that, it's late) and see if the rewritten poem is there. If this rewrite dulls everybody out, I have another one in mind - I actually I put in about 70% of it and somehow deleated the page and once again was foiled by short term memory loss, testing to begin later this month.
swayingelk1