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Offline Geraldine

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Daily mantra
« on: October 07, 2009, 03:57:31 AM »
Comments welcome and appreciated  :)

Daily mantra

What is the question.

Rarely I get and answer
from my failing memory.
maybe I am dying,

this time.
« Last Edit: October 07, 2009, 03:59:13 AM by Geraldine »
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Offline eric

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Re: Daily mantra
« Reply #1 on: October 07, 2009, 01:34:52 PM »
um, interesting angle but i don't like this one very much at all.  it's too self-indulgent and does not pay especially close attention to logic, either the intellectual kind or the emotional kind.  you have done quite a bit better lately.  pay attention to your images.  keep at it!
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Offline Geraldine

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Re: Daily mantra
« Reply #2 on: October 07, 2009, 01:53:32 PM »
Hi Eric,

cool, nuff said, i think this one made more sense inside my head than on a page, just thought i'd throw it out there in case it was one of those ones that was better than i thought it was, cant blame a girl for trying in these turbulant waters, lol!

Tho i have had a lil time during the course of the day and i may have a lil rework that may make it more clear, if its good enough i'll post a revision, will let it swill for another lil wile first tho, haha im learning the art of patience where reworks are concerned!

thanks again. (smile)
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Offline eric

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Re: Daily mantra
« Reply #3 on: October 07, 2009, 02:57:23 PM »
good for you, G.
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