Author Topic: Poem: The Cenotaph  (Read 9792 times)

Offline Uncle Bill

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Re: Poem: The Cenotaph
« Reply #15 on: May 19, 2006, 11:11:07 PM »

     I think you may be right about adding something to the poem to act as a sounding board for the other images/ideas/impressions in the poem.  I seem to have an annoying tendency to "describe" things rather than to show their characteristics through action; the resulting poems often look more like grocery lists than anything worth keeping.
     But thank you for taking the time to read the poem and to offer you comments.

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