Hi,
I am writing a fiction/fantasy novel and I have completed the entire 70 page blueprint. I am very eager to write the draft, and have actually written the first two chapters (leaving 35 to write more), but I seem to take longer to write the two-thirds of a page per five minutes.
Could anyone possibly guide me a little more specifically how to do this exercise? I uderstand to relaz and so forth, but I think my trouble comes from concerning myself with writing (including from a view point) instead of getting the ideas out.
Should I just write like:
"Dragon soars upward. Knight drops sword."
because I usually try and fine-tune it almost second-naturedly to be this:
"The dragon soared upward and the knight for the speed of the uptake was made to drop his sword. It spun and clattered to the stone flats beneath him."
I want to say I think I should jot ideas down, but I feel what I do instead is write (without worrying too much of it, but more than simple jotting) it down. The results are longer. I seem to get a page per stimulus question and sometimes two, but the resluts are not a bit boring.
An example would be most appreciated. Though I really can only thank you and offer you any help I may possibly be in repay.
Please note that I have to endure the painful circumstances of a dial-up connection that is stammering to a near stand-still in results to supposed line updates. I realy want your help, and will be back AQAP.
Thank you so very much for your time, and to you all good fortune.
Sincerely,
C. Alan Walker