No worries.

I want you to place the strongest words in the sentence's front (the first word or the one after a pronoun) and the same at the sentence's end.
Like this. My apologies to Ma100.

Original:
Eyes closed, she tried to prolong the rapturous tingle when she fused with the stone and mortar.Now, I'll highlight the nouns:
Eyes closed, she tried to prolong the rapturous tingle when she fused with the stone and mortar.Check:
Eyes and
mortar start and end the sentence. But, tingle and rapturous display the power. Let's make that them start or end words.
Edit #1:
Tingles prolonged her eyes closed when the stone and mortar fused in rapture.Sounds strange. So, let's choose synonyms. Tingles hint desire. Let's choose that.
Edit #2:
Desire prolonged her eyes closed when the stone and mortar fused in rapture.The verb sounds odd, so let's pick another. Forced? Let's try that.
Edit #3:
Desire forced her eyes closed when the stone and mortar fused in rapture.Uh-oh! That adjective invaded! Closed must go. Let's make it the verb.
Edit #4:
Desire closed her eyes when the stone and mortar fused in rapture.Closed sounds weak. Let's edit that.
Edit #5:
Desire sealed her eyes when the stone and mortar fused in rapture.Close, but let's go all out with sexual metaphors.
Edit #6:
Desire sealed her eyes when the stone and mortar embraced in rapture.Almost...
Edit #7:
Darkness kissed her eyes when the stone and mortar embraced in rapture.One more clean-up.
Darkness kissed her eyes when stone and mortar embraced in rapture.Now, the power words darkness and rapture start and end the sentence. The power verbs, kissed and embraced, enhance the middle. That was the next lesson, but what the heck.

Your turn.

Wolfe