Author Topic: Seedit: Chapter 2 (1200 words)  (Read 1254 times)

Offline thatollie

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Seedit: Chapter 2 (1200 words)
« on: January 11, 2009, 08:30:05 AM »
Piece deleted due to publishing attempt. Very Sorry.
« Last Edit: January 25, 2009, 02:11:46 AM by thatollie »
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Offline Don

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Re: Seedit: Chapter 2 (1200 words)
« Reply #1 on: January 11, 2009, 11:53:17 AM »
Interesting chapter, Mr. Ollie.

I'm wondering if the good doctor's Swiss cheese memory is going to be a problem later on. What fun would it be to scare the hell out of him if he forgot about it in the time it took him to run to the next room?

On the other hand, it would be an ingenious (and comical) plot device if someone/thing were trying to scare him to death only to be foiled by his absence of a short-term memory. Would this someone/thing die of frustration after a gazillion vain attempts, hoist on their own petard?

Guess I'll have to wait for chapter 3.  :)  Well done.
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Re: Seedit: Chapter 2 (1200 words)
« Reply #2 on: January 12, 2009, 11:42:13 AM »
Cheers Don, glad you liked it.
It really was interesting to write.


« Last Edit: January 25, 2009, 02:11:59 AM by thatollie »
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