Author Topic: Last Request. (A short little thing.)  (Read 3540 times)

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Re: Last Request. (A short little thing.)
« Reply #15 on: November 07, 2008, 08:28:41 PM »
i find that the tittle suits the story well, it's a sad story but i think it had a right ending  ;)

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Re: Last Request. (A short little thing.)
« Reply #16 on: November 07, 2008, 08:36:11 PM »
It was the right ending.

With that family anything else would have been a cop-out.  He got the nurse out of the room, he kept the grandchildren away.  Just a swift end for himself and a neat - ok, noisy and messy - excision of the 'bad' generation.

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Re: Last Request. (A short little thing.)
« Reply #17 on: November 07, 2008, 09:01:34 PM »
He orphaned all his grandchildren, and he was probably a crap father anyway.
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