Hi morgs, chilies here.
You can always send a sample of your work to this site, there is always someone who will look at it and help out. Also you could get the course that I bought: Write any book in 28 days - written by Nick. You may have heard mention of it here and there on this site. I don't usually advertise such things, but I'll make an exception in this case because it works. It has a section about chapter construction and a section about constructing a title for your work that will grab the reader and, more impotantly perhaps, the editor first. Most of all, it really doesn't cost that much, and in my opinion is worth every penny escpecially if you intend to be a full time writer. I'll take my salesman's hat off now and wish you all the best with your work whatever you decide to do.
chillies