Author Topic: need help, comments n ideas with story plot (real short post)  (Read 12528 times)

Offline Biola

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Re: need help, comments n ideas with story plot (real short post)
« Reply #15 on: September 12, 2009, 05:21:43 AM »
Hi QB,
You need first to have a design document. It tell you your chances of anybody picking it up, the rationale, and a synopsis which you spread out as it were. Like Midnight Candle said though, you'd have problem with it as you have analysed, (hope you will give your presentaion in proper English). Hear that there are nine ways to kill a cat! Goodluck
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Re: need help, comments n ideas with story plot (real short post)
« Reply #16 on: January 03, 2010, 12:20:19 AM »
take the race idea out add his dad or grandpa got mixed in with the wrong people and got killed owes some money to them and they want it right then.

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Re: need help, comments n ideas with story plot (real short post)
« Reply #17 on: January 15, 2010, 09:17:56 AM »
2 b takn searyuslee u shd larn 2 right furst
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Re: need help, comments n ideas with story plot (real short post)
« Reply #18 on: June 09, 2010, 11:50:58 AM »
hmm, well....stories like this are filmed all the time.  people seem to like them.  not my particular cup of tea, unless someone like scorcese comes along to give it some class and artistry.   
you've had a decent amount of comments so it must be true that others would be interested.  go for it.