Author Topic: The Story [One Swear]  (Read 1250 times)

StrayDog

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The Story [One Swear]
« on: June 28, 2008, 12:55:22 PM »
For those that missed it originally...

Sitting on stone steps in Autumn,
I love to ponder a wind swept epic
and smile as it unfloods.

Perched in my chair - tenterhooks,
pulse gasping as page gulping,
a tense thriller in the planning.

But as I lie tonight,
it'll always come back
to comedy.
So I'll imagine the epics
and plan the thrillers
but when the shit hits the story,
I'll try to be funny.
« Last Edit: June 28, 2008, 01:01:48 PM by thatollie »

Offline Akeith (Gray)

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Re: The Story [One Swear]
« Reply #1 on: June 28, 2008, 01:56:36 PM »
ThatOllie:

Very nicely done.

Nice imagery here; nice thought.

Gray

StrayDog

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Re: The Story [One Swear]
« Reply #2 on: June 29, 2008, 10:34:31 PM »
Cheers Gray.