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Offline SteveJ

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The Artists Impression - Part Two
« on: May 08, 2008, 04:07:15 PM »
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Re: The Artists Impression - Part Two
« Reply #1 on: May 08, 2008, 04:50:23 PM »
Hi Steve. Yep a good end mate.
really enjoyed this one.
Ma :)

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Re: The Artists Impression - Part Two
« Reply #2 on: May 08, 2008, 05:36:43 PM »
Aaaaargghh....the one thing that always makes me cringe and go all 'orrible.....is anything to do with throats being cut....oooh .I can't stand it....I can't watch it on t.v. or read it ....uurrggh...it's the thought of it...aarrghhh...
You know I love your stories, including this one ...but did it have to be the throat!....aarrghhh.. :o


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Re: The Artists Impression - Part Two
« Reply #3 on: May 08, 2008, 05:46:23 PM »
Thank you, Cap'm Ninny :) :)

Next story, I'll get my character to cut someone's hair instead ;D ;D
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Re: The Artists Impression - Part Two
« Reply #4 on: May 08, 2008, 06:06:11 PM »
Ah,
Good idea, this gallery business. I thought I'd have a stroll around to see what exquiste pieces of work might be on show, and what do I find? Graphic violence with pictures as well as words. It could only be Steve.  ;)
Well written mate and superbly grisly. I've just realized I've not read that much of your stuff. This gives me the chance to catch up and see what you've been up to. Seriousy, you write with great clarity and economy of words. It makes your stuff easy on the eye and enjoyable to read. There are no 'over ambitious' words trying to grab my attention and so as a reader I am left to enjoy the story.

Cheers Hunter   

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Re: The Artists Impression - Part Two
« Reply #5 on: May 08, 2008, 06:18:31 PM »
Hello Mr Hunter, sir :)

I was just saying to my esteemed colleague Ma that I write too much gory, spooky stuff.
I need to venture away from all that, I feel.

Thanks for the comments, mate :) :)
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