Author Topic: The Castle (Part 4)  (Read 6397 times)

davidleejones13

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Re: The Castle (Part 4)
« Reply #15 on: April 28, 2008, 01:33:53 PM »
Steve,
Thanks man,
I am really enjoying this ghost story. The part with the Union soldier is the ghost story that my best friends sister told me. Only, he did not fire his musket. He just stood and stared at her from the edge of the bed (not a sleeping bag) and then went over and sat in the chair. As dawn daylight lightened the room, he faded away. Then She ranfrom the house.
I think the embellished version I have worked on is a bit more suspenseful.

Thanks for reading Steve.

Lee

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Re: The Castle (Part 4)
« Reply #16 on: April 28, 2008, 04:40:28 PM »
When are you posting Part 5, Mr Lee? :)
Ahhh, the timezone's are different...I guess it'll be tomorrow?
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davidleejones13

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Re: The Castle (Part 4)
« Reply #17 on: April 28, 2008, 04:45:58 PM »
Steve,
Yep. It won't be until tomorrow, but I am absolutely thrilled you like it. I guess it is only fair after you made me wait so long during you Salvatore House series ;D.

I have a dilemma though. I have two endings in mind. One tradgic and the other NOT AS tragic. I may send you both ideas and have you choose before I post. OR, I could put them both up here and let MWC do it.

Thanks Steve,
Your fellow PIRATE,
Lee

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Re: The Castle (Part 4)
« Reply #18 on: April 28, 2008, 04:59:39 PM »
How about tragic and bloody scary  :o

davidleejones13

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Re: The Castle (Part 4)
« Reply #19 on: April 28, 2008, 05:03:39 PM »
One is bloody and scary, the other interesting and scary. I will try them both out here I guess and possibly do a poll. I am just glad people are liking it.

Lee ;)\(fellow pirate hideout member)

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Re: The Castle (Part 4)
« Reply #20 on: April 28, 2008, 05:36:29 PM »
Freaky cool!!  I love it and I see by the posts in the group, there are several of you with a taste for the horror/mystery/sci-fi.  I personally LOVE scary movies, the paranormal is my fave.. loved the snipit.

A.

davidleejones13

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Re: The Castle (Part 4)
« Reply #21 on: April 28, 2008, 08:21:22 PM »
Cool YoA.
I am glad you like. Horror/mystery is a big subject around here. I would suggest The Salvatore House by Steve 08, Any thing by Caxton Tempest, any of MA100 later stories, and any of the TOOTHIE series by me. Just use the ol search engine if you DARE!!!!Muahahahahah. There are a bunch of great horror stories here. You can find it all on MWC, there is a great well of talent here!

Oh, hey, and now Chris Silva is back, you have to check out his work. The man is the next Stephen King/ Isaac Asimov. ;D

Welcome YoA, and thanks for checking out my story.

Lee
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midnightcandle

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Re: The Castle (Part 4)
« Reply #22 on: April 29, 2008, 05:38:45 AM »
That was really good stuff dude :o

davidleejones13

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Re: The Castle (Part 4)
« Reply #23 on: April 29, 2008, 12:42:57 PM »
Thanks Midnight.
When you read Part 5 please check out the poll'.
Thank you so much for reading my little ghost story. Your kind comments have been appreciated and kept me writing. Thanks for the encouragement. ;D

Lee