Author Topic: Toothie (Horror, a short story) (Adult Language)  (Read 5290 times)

davidleejones13

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Re: Toothie (Horror, a short story)
« Reply #15 on: May 05, 2008, 05:39:05 PM »
Thanks Cap'm,
I must have hit the rum too hard this night. I cannot remember. Thank you for bringing TOOTHIE back from the dead... ;D

It is a pretty descent series if I do say so myself. MWC kept me writing these and I guarantee the plot thickens and it does get better as it goes. If you do not think so, I will refund your money! ;)

\Thanks for reading...

Thanks JHMull,
Wait until you get to about part four. That is when it gets really fun.

Thanks all.,
Lee

davidleejones13

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Re: Toothie (Horror, a short story)
« Reply #16 on: May 06, 2008, 12:09:05 AM »
Capm Ninny.
thanks for finding the typo, it has been fixed.
Also, thank you so very much for bringing my monster back.

Your 1st mate,
Lee

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Re: Toothie (Horror, a short story)
« Reply #17 on: May 11, 2008, 04:55:54 AM »
 ;D And so begins my journey into the darkness that is Toothie. They should make a video game about this someday...

Great start, Lee!

davidleejones13

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Re: Toothie (Horror, a short story)
« Reply #18 on: May 12, 2008, 02:43:04 AM »
Thanks Louie,
Do not make a final opinion until you read all 13 chapters! ::)

Lee

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Re: Toothie (Horror, a short story)
« Reply #19 on: May 12, 2008, 02:46:55 AM »
 ;D Aah- but have you read my other review?

davidleejones13

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Re: Toothie (Horror, a short story)
« Reply #20 on: May 12, 2008, 10:24:21 AM »
Hiya Louie,
What review are ya talking about...I do not think I have. Of course I have been sorry busy and also very absent from MWC due to the call of tame life, I may have rolled right over it...which I tend to do sometimes.
I miss being aboard our Pirate SHip, the THINGY!
Hope all is well and there have been no mutinies!

Your former 1st Mate,
Lee

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Re: Toothie (Horror, a short story)
« Reply #21 on: May 12, 2008, 10:40:40 AM »
What mutiny?

*whistles a jolly tune*

Oh, and you already commented on that review ;D I told you that I loved dualities! I'm obsessed with them, really, and I love how Toothie manages to control his body and all. It's all so wonderful that it makes my stomach do little twirls inside... like fluttering pixies.

davidleejones13

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Re: Toothie (Horror, a short story)
« Reply #22 on: May 12, 2008, 11:09:38 AM »
Louie,
As we say in the States...you are a trip my friend.
I am proud to call you that (friend that is)! ;D

Lee