The computer slid into the darkness of my electric neglect.
Crying for pain in the snow-ropes of random.
Easily aching, the wax of rendered delusions
scrapes the blue wall of defeat.

Will the rug weave the willful drops of the marmalade captain?
Will the night dog bite the wrapper?

Heavenly hues of salamanders pretend to suck the jacket of Ohio.

Warping, wrenching, churning;
for the fruits of the tomato-whale linger purposefully past
the tree green penis of time.

Parting, parting.

The candy cane wires of memories leave them
for the froth of integrity.

Never again shall I wade past the silver needle.
Past  its  wretched peace.

Passed the purple.

Passed the green.

Past the charcoal clouds, mourning the death of the sun garden.

When the will-bird colors its  eye
greener then the glass of tomorrow,
Then the water will free the frog of peace.

Wow, not bad at all. I have nothing to add here for this piece.

Thank you! I’m happy to receive your feedback! Always happy to see a “Wow”!

Hi EliTaffJr,

Welcome to the community! Killer Space Clown sounds like something I would appreciate reading! I found it on Google Books, I saved it so I can check it out later. The cover is awesome!

Congratulations on Self Publishing! It would be awesome if you could share your experience into the world of Self Publishing, challenges your ran into or moments that were unexpected, I'm sure it will be helpful to others that are looking at or just starting out with self publishing their own works.

Excited to read what you have and happy to see your contributions to the forum!
Jameela

I love this story! Keep it up!

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