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Review My Work / Re: Into Ocean Waves Short Story (350 words)
« Last post by Ariel Artemis on March 02, 2021, 07:06:13 AM »
You're welcome. I look forward to reading other work you do
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Review My Work / Re: Into Ocean Waves Short Story (350 words)
« Last post by HvdW on March 02, 2021, 03:33:29 AM »
Thank you for reading the story and your kind praise :)
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The Coffee Shop / Re: Quotes that make you stop
« Last post by JTetstone on March 01, 2021, 10:10:00 PM »
Never under estimate, space and time. We travel- but- journey not, beyond the space we occupy.   -jt 
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Review My Poetry / Re: An Interesting Burden
« Last post by IzzBuzz on March 01, 2021, 09:38:25 PM »
I enjoyed reading your poem.
You left it open to interpretation, which was meaningful to me as I was able to put myself in the poem and assess my hurts in life. 

The lines, that I referenced above, led me down a path of realization and growth.
You drew me in!

Wow, that's so meaningful to hear! I'm glad you got something out of my poem :)
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Review My Poetry / Blemishes on Stone
« Last post by Royal Thorn 78 on March 01, 2021, 08:41:25 PM »
Blemishes on Stone

my senses draw tight
something devout dawdles deep
beyond blemishes



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Review My Poetry / Re: Vigilantes: or how we killed the cat lady
« Last post by Royal Thorn 78 on March 01, 2021, 08:38:19 PM »
A novel tucked into a poem -- Indar this is amazing writing.
You lay humanity open for the look-see, the good and the struggling.

There are what would otherwise be a few nits with respect to syntax & diction, but I think they add texture to the voice of the N.  Don't change a thing.

Cheers.

R
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Review My Poetry / Re: Purity
« Last post by Royal Thorn 78 on March 01, 2021, 08:22:22 PM »
I retract what I previously posted -- what Indar says is right.  100%
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Review My Poetry / Re: In Daylight
« Last post by crch on March 01, 2021, 07:07:04 PM »
Paraphilia - interesting
(I googled it!)

This is why I love to read.  It takes me to places unknown and creates conversation - even if it is within myself!

Thanks for sharing.
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Review My Poetry / Re: Vigilantes: or how we killed the cat lady
« Last post by crch on March 01, 2021, 06:58:44 PM »
YES!
It's wonderful
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Review My Poetry / Re: In Daylight
« Last post by indar on March 01, 2021, 06:56:13 PM »
Context helps. I work with individuals suffering from paraphilia so I took it some way. Wondering if that was the intention to strike parallel with atrocity/ depravity.

I suspect paraphilia (which I had to google) might come into play and it might be somewhat situation specific. Thank you RK (if I may) for adding another dimension to the discussion
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