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Review My Work / Re: Critters
« Last post by Robotics101 on Yesterday at 08:25:25 PM »
A critter is someone who critiques stories.
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Review My Work / Re: listen for her
« Last post by j2burg on Yesterday at 02:16:34 PM »
It’s good to push boundaries and try something new, however creative endeavours need to do 2 things; say something and connect with people and this does neither.

If you think of the original artists, poets and novelists of the last 50 years they have done these 2 things. They have communicated an idea, but there is nothing here to think about.

Are you able to explain what, ‘a tfk a;e,’ means in a way that people would understand, because on the page it makes no sense.

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Review My Work / Re: Critters
« Last post by j2burg on Yesterday at 01:03:41 PM »
What is a critter?
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Review My Work / Re: Salem, Ch. 1 and 2
« Last post by j2burg on Yesterday at 01:00:59 PM »
Hi, I agree with the other comments; nice imagery but you are telling and not showing us the story.

Of course, a story will have a mix of showing and telling, but you should really start a book with showing us some action.

For example you write- “There is a lot of spirituality in Lily Dale.”
Why not give us a funny or tense opening scene that shows this. It could include some interesting local characters or a particular incident.

Good luck!
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Review My Work / Critters
« Last post by Robotics101 on Yesterday at 03:14:14 AM »
Hi. Newbie looking for critters of Sci-fi, Sci-fi/crime, Sci-fi/mystery-thriller.  :) I hope this is how I'm supposed to ask?
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Review My Poetry / Re: a thousand deers passing
« Last post by ssilvs on May 25, 2020, 11:47:13 PM »
Hi. Is this poem about two legged dears or four legged deer? If its about 4 legged deer, it reads like the writer is suffering from 'deer fever'  Not quite sure which deer/dear this poem is about. Welcome back to MWC.

no clue! thanks
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Review My Poetry / Re: a thousand deers passing
« Last post by JTetstone on May 25, 2020, 06:48:02 PM »
Hi. Is this poem about two legged dears or four legged deer? If its about 4 legged deer, it reads like the writer is suffering from 'deer fever'  Not quite sure which deer/dear this poem is about. Welcome back to MWC.
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The Writers Circle / Re: Do you write every single day?
« Last post by Remotely on May 25, 2020, 01:52:12 PM »
Yes, I write everyday. Whether it is adding to an unfinished story, participating on forums like this one, editing or creating a lyric or making money on a content mill.....I write everyday.

I thoroughly enjoy writing.
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Welcome Board - START HERE! / Hello!
« Last post by MaryYoussef on May 25, 2020, 01:50:37 PM »
Hello there!
I'm Mary Y. from Egypt.
I'm a pharmacist. I like to read, travel, play music, capture the beauty of nature in silence, and playing music.
I'm here mostly to be a beta reader and help writers to get the overview of their work from my point of view "as a reader".
It's my first time here, and I'm so excited to join such great community.
Looking forward to helping as many as I can!
Best Regards
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The Gallery / Re: Terri or Terry Schiavo-my writing project
« Last post by JTetstone on May 24, 2020, 11:53:19 AM »
I read Michael Schiavo's book. The behavior of Terri's parents, Governor Jeb Bush, and all the other Buttinskis was reprehensible. MYOB please.

I don't rely on books. My opinion is based on court documents-beginning in 1990;when the Theresa Schiavo case was first opened in Pinellas County, Florida.By the way: I have every court document on the case. Thank you for expressing your opinion.
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