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Poets Corner => Review My Poetry => Topic started by: ozofe on June 05, 2021, 03:26:54 AM

Title: I Know
Post by: ozofe on June 05, 2021, 03:26:54 AM
I know from the start
You're really smart.
Then you captured my heart
Hoping we'd never part.
I know that a trial
Needs no denial
But it was your dial
That made me special.
I know for sure
This love may endure
For it is selfless and pure
With you, I feel secure.
It's all worth the waiting
Missed chances were patching
Now we're rejoicing.
And God we're praising!
Title: Re: I Know
Post by: jt72 on June 05, 2021, 11:13:38 AM
I know from the start
You're really smart.
Then you captured my heart
Hoping we'd never part.
I know that a trial
Needs no denial
But it was your dial
That made me special.
I know for sure
This love may endure
For it is selfless and pure
With you, I feel secure.
It's all worth the waiting
Missed chances were patching
Now we're rejoicing.
And God we're praising!

I know from the start
You're really smart.
Then you captured my heart
Hoping we'd never part.

I know that a trial
Needs no denial
But it was your dial
That made me special.

I know for sure
This love may endure
For it is selfless and pure
With you, I feel secure.


The poem broken down into stanzas creates a mood for
the thoughts to flow evenly.
The fourth stanza kilt the flow of the poem.

Just my opinion. Best of luck with your writing.   jt