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Workshop => Review My Work => Topic started by: Brad2901 on June 04, 2021, 03:12:14 PM

Title: Review my poem please
Post by: Brad2901 on June 04, 2021, 03:12:14 PM
Hi everyone I would love some complete honest opinions on my poem pretty please
thank you :-*
Title: Re: Review my poem please
Post by: jt72 on June 04, 2021, 05:24:15 PM
Third stanza lines 1 and three.

But I'd rather die [than] admit I care
Risk my pride to be left in despair
I want you ,crave you,[need you]

Hope this helps.