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Poets Corner => Review My Poetry => Topic started by: Royal Thorn 78 on March 01, 2021, 08:41:25 PM

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Post by: Royal Thorn 78 on March 01, 2021, 08:41:25 PM
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Title: Re: Nodules in a Fuzzed Universe
Post by: indar on March 02, 2021, 01:25:02 PM
Fog stiffens at the trailhead

Here is a fine example of a grabber of a first line--I'm jealous I didn't think of it.
Title: Re: Nodules in a Fuzzed Universe
Post by: jt72 on March 02, 2021, 09:40:50 PM
The powers that be work in strange ways. I drew much insight from the words you wrote. I enjoyed reading your poem. :)
Title: Re: like
Post by: indar on March 11, 2021, 02:36:02 PM
Roy, are you OK?
Title: Re: like
Post by: Royal Thorn 78 on March 11, 2021, 07:51:27 PM
Dissipating.  ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: like
Post by: indar on March 11, 2021, 08:07:45 PM
I expect you to reassemble elsewhere by April, preferably sooner. Obviously you are about to go poooof! here.
Title: Re: like
Post by: Royal Thorn 78 on March 11, 2021, 08:36:28 PM
You read this perfectly. ;D 


Yes -- National Poetry Month!!! 


I shall . . . I shall!