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Poets Corner => Review My Poetry => Topic started by: crch on March 01, 2021, 06:46:10 PM

Title: The Cruelty of Justice
Post by: crch on March 01, 2021, 06:46:10 PM






As motives bend the truth, Justice lies in wait.

As futility dictates a plan, Justice bleeds it dry.

It matters not to be fancied as righteous, Peace in truth will not be found.

So, leave sanity to the insane.
Title: Re: The Cruelty of Justice
Post by: Patrick.G on March 22, 2021, 09:01:41 PM
Wow, hard-hitting. Can relate this to so much going on in the world atm. Would love to maybe see an extended version of this as well.
Title: Re: The Cruelty of Justice
Post by: crch on March 22, 2021, 10:36:59 PM
Hi!  Extensions really stretch me... 
The children's poem was a sad story, tied with a bow.

This one is raw with no bow. 
It would be interesting to see if I can extend it.
 I'll think on it.

I appreciate your post!