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Poets Corner => Review My Poetry => Topic started by: TK on May 13, 2020, 12:54:19 AM

Title: Conflicting Opinions [cw: strong language]
Post by: TK on May 13, 2020, 12:54:19 AM
I have to shart
     What? Why?
I can feel it.
     Well, don't!
But I have to.
     What the hell? Why do you have to shart?
I can feel it.
     --
I have to shart.
Title: Re: Conflicting Opinions [cw: strong language]
Post by: maryhughes on May 16, 2020, 02:14:48 PM
Really?  what do you want me to say?  Shart is not a word I'm familiar with.  Merde alors, perhaps?
What's the context? 
Title: Re: Conflicting Opinions [cw: strong language]
Post by: ssilvs on May 24, 2020, 01:36:01 AM
well, it certainly could work as a humor poem!