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Poets Corner => Review My Poetry => Topic started by: dlp on October 10, 2018, 10:32:51 PM

Title: Scorpions
Post by: dlp on October 10, 2018, 10:32:51 PM

Wandering passed,
Passed wandering.
Passed the prunes of my tarantula garden.

Boat orange and lemon splatter the legs of the beast.
Clean claws,
injection complete.

Random attacks the sweet order of thought
Title: Re: Scorpions
Post by: JanTetstone on October 10, 2018, 11:21:16 PM

Wandering passed,
Passed wandering.
Passed the prunes of my tarantula garden.

Boat orange and lemon splatter the legs of the beast.
Clean claws,
injection complete.

Random attacks the sweet order of thought

dip, I couldn't follow the picture you were drawing with words......

This describes the scorpions I've met:


Boat orange and lemon splatter the legs of the beast.
Clean claws,
injection complete.

Title: Re: Scorpions
Post by: Mark T on October 14, 2018, 10:08:15 AM
dlp, I refer you to item 7 of the posting guidelines for this board as stickied above by Amie in 2007. You are requested not to post titles - or anything else for that matter - in all capital letters. 
Title: Re: Scorpions
Post by: dlp on October 14, 2018, 11:29:44 AM
thank you for the heads up