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Workshop => Review My Work => Topic started by: Kim21 on July 10, 2018, 04:56:38 AM

Title: A Little Fun
Post by: Kim21 on July 10, 2018, 04:56:38 AM
He was everything that I wanted
Or that was what I thought at least.

The times we spend together,
He made me feel so special.
Maybe I was too blind to see

He had his fun, time is up.
His words to me,
He would never leave her for me.
Words that cut so deep

I guess it was my fault as much as it was his.
We wanted nothing,
But something happened.

Now all I have left is a precious little bean inside me
To remind me of someone that was never mine…

PS: Let me know what you think please
Title: Re: A Little Fun
Post by: geethr75 on August 19, 2018, 06:35:41 AM
Good one.
Title: Re: A Little Fun
Post by: Kim21 on August 20, 2018, 02:06:31 AM
Thank you :)