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Title: hello, would anyone mind reading this please?
Post by: geehope on March 13, 2018, 02:25:45 PM
My love for you is like the ocean, strong and consuming, overpowering every other emotion.
but then your love for me was gone, and i was left with nothing but the ocean, cold and harsh.
yet i remain here, waiting to feel something, anything as strong and consuming as you.



constructive criticism or any comments are helpful and welcomed, thank you :)