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Title: Liminal : A YA Play (contains PG-13 language)
Post by: Tsvetock on January 24, 2017, 04:22:46 PM
Hi everyone! This is a bit of a long-ish play but I'd really appreciate some feedback on it. In particular, I'm a bit unsure about the ending so if you want to just skim the beginning and read the end that's helpful too. Thanks!

Synopsis: A young girl runs away from home to find herself. I promise its a lot more interesting than that, I'm just bad at summaries....
Word count: 4,930

You can view the document through this link:

Once again, thank you!
Title: Re: Liminal : A YA Play (contains PG-13 language)
Post by: Artemis Quark on January 24, 2017, 05:04:26 PM
Welcome to MWC, Anna.

In case you haven't already found it, please take a moment to read the forum guidelines here:

Also check out the guidelines for scripts here and note that the word count limit for scripts is 1500 words since the number of lines in dialogue-heavy posts will cover multiple pages and/or excessive scrolling.

I see you have opted to include a link instead, since the script excerpt is nearly five thousand words. You will find that few members will click on a link from a relative unknown member.

I suggest you paste the ending that concerns you along with a synopsis to orient us. You will more likely get responses.

MWC is a great place to get useful feedback. Be sure to offer a few critiques for each one you request to keep things fair.

Note you will not be able to edit your posts until you've posted 50 times, so be sure to click the Preview button first to read what you will be posting.

You might also consider entering any open flash, short story or poetry contests. They’re fun and anonymous.

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