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Workshop => Review My Script => Topic started by: Mister URL on May 17, 2016, 06:40:41 AM

Title: Script
Post by: Mister URL on May 17, 2016, 06:40:41 AM
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INT. MISTER URLs OFFICE EARLY MORNING

The walls are lined floor to ceiling with books in ramshackle shelves. A radio plays the local news at low volume. MISTER URL stares at the large LCD screen, poking at keys with his surprisingly effective two-finger style. He is wearing a white T-shirt and sweat pants. He has a cup of coffee beside the keyboard. He has a mild frown on his otherwise cow-placid face.

MISTER URL
(to himself)
Still no entries in the Space Contest. Something will have to be done to make it more attractive. But not too attractive: I could not handle a hundred entries.

He sips coffee and thinks ...

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INT. MISTER URLs OFFICE, 15 MINUTES LATER

MISTER URL
(to himself)
Hahahahah. Ill generate a false SCRIPT for review and fool people into reading it. Then they will convert their irritation to action and enter. Hahahahahha.

MISTER URL
(aloud)
Be sure to enter the new Short Story Challenge #38 over in the Writing Games and Challenges section.

MISTER URL
Sits with a smug look on his face. Sips coffee. Scratches.

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Title: Re: Script
Post by: Artemis Quark on May 17, 2016, 07:25:48 AM
To sooth some of the irritation you've stirred, here's the link to the Short Story Challenge: http://mywriterscircle.com/index.php?topic=60269.msg1142743#msg1142743

AQ
Title: Re: Script
Post by: Vogel on May 17, 2016, 05:28:48 PM
Pretty good little advertising technique there, Mister URL.

It's damn slow around here right now, ain't it?
Title: Re: Script
Post by: To a T on May 17, 2016, 10:17:06 PM
Nice P.R.

-May I recommend a nice white wine to replace that cuppa...